Pureon Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 Carthaginian Blacksmith concept:What do you guys think, like it? 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leper Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 Gasp! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 Me Gusta! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mythos_Ruler Posted July 10, 2013 Author Share Posted July 10, 2013 Looks great. Only real critique is that I think an anvil may be too heavy to sit solely on a picnic table. Other than that, it looks pretty much commit-ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludo38 Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 I like it a lot, but to perfect it, I think the fire should be more present, more visible, to stress up the idea of "blacksmith". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki1950 Posted July 11, 2013 Share Posted July 11, 2013 Add on to Myltos's comment the anvil should on it's own as to properly use it all sides of it should be accessible.Enjoy the Choice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordGood Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 These are looking brilliant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureon Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 Thanks for the feedback on the Carthaginian Blacksmith everyone Here's my Persian Blacksmith concept: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nolanjoker Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 and if you can put it some fences?, is very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gab Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 The black dot on the chimney doesn't feel like a hole(but maybe it's just the picture...)Otherwise, maybe the most beautifull persian building ^o^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludo38 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 Sweet !I love it, and the chimney design is very cool.Just one suggestion : instead of the timber boxes on the ground under the shadow, I'd rather see metal objects such as weapons or else, on a table. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serveurix Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 The carthaginian and persian blacksmith lack a bucket of water, IMO.And the chimneys are a bit too clean, there should be some black soot marks, at least on the top ring of the chimney.Apart from that it's perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureon Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Thanks for the feedback guys. Glad you like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordGood Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Persian chimney looks a little arabesque to me but that's just my opinion. On the other hand, the roundness will help distinguish it from the other persian buildings. These are looking great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Very nice persian one looks ready to commit too I want to finish this one before start commiting the ones I made. Greek blacksmith concept (quite humble ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plumo Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 The door seems like a texture that is painted on the wall. Except that, great!Also a question: is the roof historical? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludo38 Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 Enrique, great work on this one, I love it. As Plumo I notice the door looking too flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 I don't know if it's historical, I did it without references. It can be changed if you think it doesn't fit or it's historically inaccurate. The door and other details are not complete yet. Just sharing to see if the community thinks it's the right direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wraitii Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 I think the roof looks weird, for what it's worth. I'd expect it round, or sloped in one direction only. Though if it happens to be historical, keep it like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mythos_Ruler Posted July 17, 2013 Author Share Posted July 17, 2013 Good direction. The roof is okay. I think it needs a strip of tiles running down the valleys of the slopes though (the seams between the slopes). Hope that makes sense. Also, maybe mirror it so that the smoke stacks of all the blacksmiths are on the same side? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureon Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 I'd have to agree with the others, there's something not quite right with that roof, and I don't think a strip of tiles in the valley areas will help it. Other than that all the concepts Enrique's presented are ready to commit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 Fair enough, I'll make some changes and see if it looks better Thanks for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Finally found some time to work more on it. Almost finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureon Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Looks amazing Do those bricks on the corners of the structure actually stick out? I love those little details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrique Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Do those bricks on the corners of the structure actually stick out? I love those little details.Yes I'll see if the polycount is not too high when is finished and I can keep them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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