You are welcome to post where you think is best.
Codewise, a good improvement @ffm2 would be packing your mod as an extension of localratings. In practice, include (only) your additions in a mod, and add localratings as a dependency. It will simplify maintaining and distributing the code. It will also ensure compatibility with the base mod across versions. Up to you - but I think your work will benefit!
Hi and welcome to the forum! Unfortunately, the only way I am aware is to actually select the ship and see the garrisoned number of people. There has been multiple suggestions to modify that so it will be addressed.