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Editing Suggestion: History of the Iberians


NorahAura
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Please change the following text in the History of Iberians from the Main Menu.

Justification: Bad grammar, incorrect word usage

Language: English

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They were a relatively peaceful culture, and when they fought it fighting in other's battles as mercenaries. When they fought their won battle, they proved tenacious when Rome sought to take their land and freedom away from them. Yet, the Iberians were put in submission once and for all by the Romans in 18 B.C.

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They were a relatively peaceful culture. When they fought, it was usually as mercenaries in other's battles. However, when Rome sought to take their land and freedom away, they proved tenacious. In the end, the Iberians submitted to the Romans in 19 B.C.

What do you think?

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Also you can change culture by people as different Iberian villages were very different in culture (Contestanos, deitanos, turdetanos) and are included as Iberians by the use of language.

regards

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Tambien se puede cambiar cultura por pueblo, ya que en cultura los diferentes pueblos íberos eran muy diferentes (contestanos, deitanos, turdetanos) y se engloban como íberos por el uso de la lengua.

Saludos

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Also you can change culture by people as different Iberian villages were very different in culture (Contestanos, deitanos, turdetanos) and are included as Iberians by the use of language.

regards

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Tambien se puede cambiar cultura por pueblo, ya que en cultura los diferentes pueblos íberos eran muy diferentes (contestanos, deitanos, turdetanos) y se engloban como íberos por el uso de la lengua.

Saludos

Some day I'd like to split them up into Lusitanians, Iberians, and Celt-Iberians, but that may be pretty far into the future.
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